You are teaching your learners at IFMA how to
write a research project. You asked students to
write the introduction of the research project.
Learners handed in the written assignment, and
now you are writing comments for their feedback.
In this context, analyze the statements below, with
your comment and the area being focused on:
I. Comment: the introduction should briefly
describe the theme of your research, its aims
and explain the importance of your research.
Area: communicative aim of the genre.
II. Comment: I can understand your point here,
but connect the sentences in this paragraph
using linkers. Also, avoid repetition of words
by using pronouns and synonyms.
Area: organization and coherence.
III. Comment: avoid talking to your reader, that is
not typical of introduction in research
projects.
Area: language accuracy.
IV. Comment: your target reader is the professor
and/or another researcher, so use formal
language, avoiding contractions and
colloquial expressions.
Area: appropriate register of the genre.
V. Comment: use present perfect here, since
there is no time reference for the action and
this can happen again.
Area: appropriate tone of the genre.
VI. Comment: you discuss a number of different
points in a single block. Divide it into different
paragraphs.
Area: layout and organization.
The statements in which the feedback comment is
completely in line with the area are